Dragon Frame Animation: Peer Review

During this review we made constructive commentary on the animations we had made.
The group suggested that the animation was far too fast and static. The gun firing lacks the usual associated impact of a gun firing; that is to say it lacks smoke and recoil.

They also suggested that the addition of a victim or target would improve the animation's length and clarify the themes of murder and violence.

On reflection, I could have made better use of additional materials to create smoke effects, and perhaps blue was not the most appropriate colour to choose as a back-drop.